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post Aug 28 2010, 10:29 PM
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Hello! I hope you like them. smile.gif







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post Aug 28 2010, 10:41 PM
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love the first, third and last, keep it up man smile.gif




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post Aug 28 2010, 11:13 PM
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   Kaioshen
post Aug 29 2010, 01:19 AM
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Watch your perspectives and composition, there are pieces where these are major flaws. Also, some of your elements in your pieces look very painted still and others do not match the surrounding area's of the mattes. Keep posting your completed pieces and even some WIP's if you want some advice and crits on any on-going pieces, keep it up dude
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   not1me
post Aug 29 2010, 01:28 AM
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QUOTE (Kaioshen @ Aug 29 2010, 03:19 AM) *
Watch your perspectives and composition, there are pieces where these are major flaws. Also, some of your elements in your pieces look very painted still and others do not match the surrounding area's of the mattes. Keep posting your completed pieces and even some WIP's if you want some advice and crits on any on-going pieces, keep it up dude

I will, thank you. smile.gif
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   Commander Sparx
post Aug 29 2010, 01:52 PM
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Your work is amazing. i think your best piece is the warm coloured one witht he planet on the right side. really nice work that. keep it up.
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   Jesper
post Sep 3 2010, 10:13 AM
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These are all great drawings, but there's, as someone already said, some issues with perspective in some of them. The third from the bottom, for example. The colosseum like building looks as if it's leaning backwards. This can probably be fixed by just making the doors, or what to call them, the arches, smaller. In the same piece, the construction to the left on the side of the mountain needs some desaturation to match the mountains saturation.

I don't really have anything else to say, the other ones are great. I especially like the last one. The first one is also a great landscape.
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   Daze
post Sep 6 2010, 07:01 PM
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wow these are beautiful, perspective is the only thing bugging me, other than that keep it up




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