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post Sep 21 2009, 09:00 PM
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post Sep 21 2009, 09:04 PM
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I think you've to follow some tutorials smile.gif

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post Sep 22 2009, 06:20 AM
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Post these on Avant Garde forums on PR biggrin.gif
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post Sep 22 2009, 07:33 AM
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great pieces. The first image is your best! the 2nd one is nice but the 3th and 4th have some problems.. the 3th has a lot of perspective issues..

but overall great pieces biggrin.gif keep it up man!!!




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post Sep 22 2009, 02:03 PM
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post Sep 22 2009, 02:23 PM
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yeh the first is the best, but you show alot of signs of good quality workmanship, keep working at it and you will definatly improve more smile.gif




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post Sep 22 2009, 05:51 PM
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Thanks Smiling Demon. smile.gif
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post Sep 22 2009, 07:27 PM
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Really awesome works, looks like a real image!




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post Sep 22 2009, 07:47 PM
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post Sep 22 2009, 11:33 PM
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I really like the first piece, good job winning the landscape contest on dA with it smile.gif
the first and the 2nd pieces are my favourite ones.
but the 2nd one has some real problems regarding the composition in my opinion.
mainly because of the main focus in the sky. also the eye-leading ability is a bit weak, as the left side feels really quite empty in the foreground, so that you feel some heavy pushing from the right, but past the foreground the eye is being pulled to the right again and way too far to the top by the sun with its surroundings.
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post Sep 23 2009, 12:49 PM
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Thank you for the long comment, Gucken. I really appreciated it.
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