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   An1ken
post Jan 31 2009, 05:07 AM
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http://an1ken.deviantart.com/art/Patience-111293161


Click the link it will take you to the Full size deviation which is viewable at 1024x768 and Download able to actual size of 3000x1500px

Update coming on it soon, a WIP
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   Smiling Demon
post Jan 31 2009, 11:40 AM
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its quite cool, but the text isn't that readable, work on that.




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   An1ken
post Jan 31 2009, 02:04 PM
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QUOTE (Smiling Demon @ Jan 31 2009, 01:40 PM) *
its quite cool, but the text isn't that readable, work on that.


Thanks man, yes After staring at it for a while..I noticed there are quite a few tings I have to change and to correct the flow of the piece...

Will update soon!
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post Jan 31 2009, 08:18 PM
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in a text piece, text should be the focal, so that's the main mistake with this piece at the moment, you spent more time on decorations and whatever doesn't belong really to text, instead of focusing on it; plus, it's a bit static, try to mess more with just the text and then maybe you could add decorations and sort of wink.gif
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