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post Jan 27 2009, 04:08 AM
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well, i love the lums cause you guys are great artist...
im practicing with this new technique...insipred By Akajork
Its a learning piece...
Could you point out the flaws and the good things?
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post Jan 27 2009, 12:03 PM
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looks pretty good. I'm not 100% about your shading because some of the areas look a little flat, but definatly not bad. Much better than I could do anyway XD. Try adding in some closer elements with more detail on your next one smile.gif




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post Jan 27 2009, 02:24 PM
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Thanks, ill try to improve, il practice with another one.....





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post Jan 29 2009, 12:34 AM
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it's a bit small, anyway, try to get more depth, when you look at mountains, you'll se that many mountains are far away than those that are in front of you and the more distant ones have like a sort of mist, depending on how distant they are, that's what imo lacks here mostly.
also try to make them more realistic with jagged smudge/brushing, mountains doesn't have smooth surfaces.
sorry i may sound harsh but i'm trying to help wink.gif
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post Jan 29 2009, 04:15 AM
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Tks Light, i like harsch, make me want to do better,
you are right,i dont have enough elements...
ill keep practicing..
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post Jan 29 2009, 06:11 PM
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Try adding another one of those structures you have on the mountains in the foreground, it'll help with the scale and add a lot of depth to the scene. You should also try to add some background mountains, right now you can only really see that one mountain you have, it would go a long way to helping the depth and composition.

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post Jan 30 2009, 03:36 AM
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wow, great feedback, ill do the add ons, see what i can come up with.....
Thank you, thank you , thank you!!!





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