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   shiin.
post Dec 24 2010, 08:24 PM
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http://bakashin.deviantart.com/art/Pense-Nisso-190769384

I spent some time deciding what to do with this job, he had trouble viewing some monitors, including mine, anyway, if you had the same problem and want to see how the job actually download it.

This job was to take the first view of the Vanguard Project, but we found several problems, so ...
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post Dec 24 2010, 10:49 PM
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Looking nice! First things first, the light behind the train chimney is really distracting, I would take it out so the focus is back at the train station with the people. The grass is quite dark; those light lamps would light the grass more. The sky seems very empty, so maybe some castle like buildings in the background hills?




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post Dec 25 2010, 12:08 AM
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I have a feeling that light is supposed to be the lamp on the front of the train, either way it is far to powerfull and distracting, dim it down so that the eye gets drawn towards the station instead.




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post Dec 25 2010, 12:44 AM
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The light in front of the train is also something that bothers me, maybe if it were softer, I do not know what to do with it, tried to balance the job would not be totally devoted to the part where people are.

I ended up focusing more on the implementation of some paintings that ended up leaving some things to fix, thanks for the criticism. (:
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