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post Feb 5 2009, 09:37 AM
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Comments and citique please
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   Light
post Feb 5 2009, 12:28 PM
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the planet looks really nice, but for the rest, i dunno, maybe you could add more elements?
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post Feb 5 2009, 06:17 PM
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need more details, the meteors look out of place.
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post Feb 5 2009, 10:30 PM
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Yeh whats there is fine, but it just needs more to be there.




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post Feb 6 2009, 07:55 AM
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Well I went there for the simplicity. Not every image of the space should have 3 planets, a nebula, 4 comets and around 200k asteroids at the same time. Those kind of pictures I don't like very much and almost all the time I want my pictures to be calm and soothing. It is just the way I like them smile.gif Anyway thanks for the feedback. I will put it up in PS again just to see what will happen (and to fix some minor bugs) and maybe I will post updated version soon
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post Feb 6 2009, 10:41 AM
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You can get clam and soothing with more detials, like for example

http://taenaron.deviantart.com/art/Denebola-82079722
http://joejesus.deviantart.com/art/Crescent-91662052
http://joejesus.deviantart.com/art/Eternal-105982388
http://joejesus.deviantart.com/art/Redemption-78343728




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post Feb 6 2009, 10:10 PM
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True. Also, work your compo. Maybe the asteroids would be better placed a little more to the ''northeast'' of the picture.... Think of the rule of thirds, it works for digital painting too.




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