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post Oct 30 2011, 07:13 AM
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post Oct 31 2011, 12:08 AM
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post Oct 31 2011, 10:36 AM
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post Oct 31 2011, 02:11 PM
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I like the background and I like (not that much) the render but they don't really work well together. Add some variety to the background and add some elements around the render to blend it better with the background.
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post Oct 31 2011, 03:47 PM
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I've merged all your topics as it seemed a little unnecessary to have them all at the moment smile.gif (hope you don't mind too much! tongue.gif)

Anyway in regards to your artwork, you generally have a good composition for your pieces but I feel you need to work in a bigger range of colours and values (they tend to be very over-contrasted at the moment).




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post Nov 1 2011, 10:22 PM
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Some New Images.. I Have More Just dont feel like posting them all..
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post Nov 1 2011, 10:24 PM
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post Nov 2 2011, 12:52 AM
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Yeah most of your work seems very much overcontrasted.
I also feel it lacks detail in there. Most of it is a pretty bold C4D on a quite plain background with a fractal on there. Try make something look like it could be real, no matter it being an abstract work.
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post Nov 3 2011, 12:29 AM
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Technica - v1 by BEKOZ
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post Nov 3 2011, 09:06 AM
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You really have to find some ways to combine the elements in your images better. Now they just don't fit together. Also play a bit more with this model. Add some details and effects and loose part of the light. Then figure out a way to combine it with the plain foreground better
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