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post Jan 20 2009, 03:07 AM
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This is my latest work I have done recently:), I hope you like it. Done on cinema 4d, zbrush and photoshop wink.gif
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post Jan 20 2009, 10:25 AM
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Wow awesome render/3d modeling skills! - Well the 3D part is awesome. But the text and the shapes in the background, isn't that great - try work a bit more on those shapes, cause the idea with them is good - but maybe a version withut shapes would also be good?

And then the typo - not that good, try make a new one. But belive me, i know how hard it is to make a great typo - i suxx at it! biggrin.gif




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post Jan 20 2009, 11:54 AM
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pretty much what aagaard just said tbh. But yeh brilliant 3d work.




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post Jan 20 2009, 12:44 PM
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great modelling, but i don't know how much some vector stuff would appeal to a 3d piece like that, maybe try to use the vector as a texture in c4d to make a pattern for the ground?
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post Jan 20 2009, 02:37 PM
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hey chaos smile.gif nice to see you here. i love it as you well know smile.gif
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post Jan 20 2009, 04:20 PM
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Looks great, but I just have to nitpick about the little white outlines the 3D model has in some places tongue.gif





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post Jan 21 2009, 05:48 PM
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thanks for the comments guys:D...and hi pom!
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post Jan 21 2009, 05:58 PM
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The typography and border needs more thinking. Try to get a basic understanding of kerning, typografy, type legibility, and crop/border.




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