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post Aug 10 2009, 04:11 PM
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My first actual speedpaint. 30minutes
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post Aug 10 2009, 04:50 PM
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can you please post the image here so we can critique it?
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post Aug 10 2009, 05:16 PM
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done
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post Aug 10 2009, 05:45 PM
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Oh i liiiike. Good speed paint. Nice atmosphere
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post Aug 11 2009, 10:23 PM
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looks good man. Maybe a bit more variety in the building types, but otherwise a decent speedy




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post Aug 12 2009, 12:08 AM
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What else can you do with it? Think of how far you can take this. I know it's a speedpaint but it's good to experiment and try many things with them ;p




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post Aug 12 2009, 08:40 AM
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Thanks guys. I am really glad that you like it.

Somni: I will try to improve it in a few days smile.gif
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post Aug 12 2009, 11:31 PM
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nice colors and good shapes.. Great speedy but yea could use some more. Maybe add more smaller scale detail and some more layers of depth to keep the viewr interested longer. Create some nice shapes that keep you interested and bring some life to the painting.

Very nice though!




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post Aug 13 2009, 11:53 AM
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Thank you Akajork. I will try to improve it in a few days
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post Aug 13 2009, 05:36 PM
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damn. thats pretty much stunning smile.gif
always wants me to take out my bamboo one -.-'
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post Aug 21 2009, 05:51 AM
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Very good job, the illumination of your speedpaint is very really. A simple work, but with a good atmosphere! wink.gif




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post Aug 21 2009, 09:51 AM
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Thanks!
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post Aug 21 2009, 03:54 PM
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The fact that this took you only 30 mins makes this image even more amazing than it currently is. The light is very well-chosen and the color-scheme looks good, too.

Too bad that everything I've to critique has already been said. Surely, another layer in the middle would add some more depth. Also, varying the brightness of the buildings would probably make it look less layer-like but more like a 3d-ish city. Some things in the very foreground could also contribute to a little depth.
The buildings have all about the same height in their respective layer. Maybe you could make their sizes a little more random so that it doesn't look too monotone (and, again, diminish the layer-like layout). Speaking about monotone, these X-like shapes and the antennas (especially in the background-buildings) are maybe a little too repetitious.

Okay, I noticed that this is pretty much just a summarization of already posted suggestions, so sorry that I couldn't contribute in any way. Anyways, I can only repeat myself, for a 30 mins painting, this looks great! Imagine how this would look if you worked on it a whole day! Great job, mate!





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