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   rainth
post Apr 10 2012, 05:48 PM
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Hello guys, i had comissionned to do a tutorial for a magazine, btw i need your commentary's, or critics, for improve it , if its possible ...


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post Apr 10 2012, 05:58 PM
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any chance we can see a bigger version?

From this one tho it looks like the clouds need work.




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post Apr 10 2012, 06:40 PM
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Indeed the clouds need more works and anything else than a cube it's a bit seen too often.




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post Apr 10 2012, 07:26 PM
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In addition to the comments above, I would try to make the background a little less symmetrical.
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   zoldik
post Apr 11 2012, 09:00 PM
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it seem in need of a kinda support beneath the cube in addition to what others said previously





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post Apr 18 2012, 08:38 PM
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Looking good mate! I like what you've done with the render so far! I agree about working on the clouds a little more. Can't wait to see this finished! smile.gif




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