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   Aagaard
post Jan 4 2009, 08:01 PM
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I have make my first real Illustration - I would like some feedback on it - hope it is okay with a DA link.

http://aagaardds.deviantart.com/art/Human-Machine-108409057




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   Aloe
post Jan 4 2009, 08:09 PM
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Its pretty nice, one of your bestter works imo.. I like the colors.. I dot like the text though.. thats really your weak point..

Oh yeah next time try not to put the focal in the middle wink.gif
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post Jan 4 2009, 08:17 PM
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Thanks biggrin.gif - Yea I'm not good at text, but this time i couldn't leave it out, cause it is an Illustration to one of my Poems.

And I will think about the Focal biggrin.gif




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post Jan 4 2009, 08:20 PM
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QUOTE (Aloe @ Jan 4 2009, 09:09 PM) *
Oh yeah next time try not to put the focal in the middle wink.gif


I agree with Aloe, the focal in middle is not very well. BUT, it's an amazing piece, really impressive and I love the colors.

Nice Work smile.gif




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post Jan 5 2009, 03:10 AM
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Great looking piece and an excellent use of colors. I'm not too big a fan of the text however, its too plain. Try using another style. But other than that, great job.




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post Jan 5 2009, 10:50 AM
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Thanks a lot!

Well that text isn't so good biggrin.gif - I hate it, how the **** do you become better to making text?




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post Jan 6 2009, 10:45 AM
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QUOTE (Aagaard @ Jan 5 2009, 11:50 AM) *
Thanks a lot!

Well that text isn't so good biggrin.gif - I hate it, how the **** do you become better to making text?


just practise check some pieces with good texts to see wath you do wrong and so on blablabla

the piece is great anyways smile.gif
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post Jan 12 2009, 02:09 PM
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Pretty nice work mate
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post Jan 13 2009, 01:48 AM
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I like it a lot, it feels kinda Daft Punk-inspired...




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