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   Daze
post Dec 29 2010, 10:05 PM
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   Somni
post Dec 30 2010, 03:20 AM
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Cool design mate!

I think right now that airplane or shuttle is too bright and keeps distracting my attention away from the letters. Make sure to keep the emphasis and focus on what you think viewers should see. If it's the DVR, then make sure that any other elements do not take that attention away. Sometimes focus can be achieved by value(if something is considerably brighter, or darker than other elements) or by a different shape, or by suggestive direction(such as shapes that point towards somewhere else).

Also, I think you should add more of those high speed lines in the back as if they were distant. The design seems to be very upfront and therefore there is no dynamism or depth.




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